Awesome submissions. Reading poems you love makes me love you more. Enjoy!
“Which Loved Her Best?” Anonymous, courtesy of Mary
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- So this is a rather folksy poem, but it warms my heart to the extent that I have considered naming my soon to be born daughter Fan. It also reminds me that as wonderful as words are, actions truly speak so much louder.
- Question #1 What are the things in your life that you are perhaps all a little too much talk and a lot less action?
- Question #2 Do you think Jack and Marian are too young for me to make them learn this poem?
“The Passionate Shepherd to His Love” Christopher Marlowe 1599, courtesy of Mary
Come live with me and be my love,
And we will all the pleasures prove
That valleys, groves, hills, and fields,
Woods or steepy mountain yields.
And we will sit upon the rocks,
Seeing the shepherds feed their flocks,
By shallow rivers to whose falls
Melodious birds sing madrigals.
And I will make thee beds of roses
And a thousand fragrant posies,
A cap of flowers, and a kirtle
Embroidered all with leaves of myrtle;
A gown made of the finest wool
Which from our pretty lambs we pull;
Fair lined slippers for the cold,
With buckles of th purest gold;
A belt of straw and ivy buds,
With coral clasps and amber studs:
And if these pleasures may thee move,
Come live with me and be my love.
The shepherds' swains shall dance and sing
For thy delight each May morning:
If these delights thy mind may move,
Then live with me and be my love.
“The Nymph’s Reply to the Shepherd” Sir Walter Raleigh 1600, courtesy of Mary
If all the world and love were young,
And truth in every shepherd's tongue,
These pretty pleasures might me move
To live with thee and be thy love.
Time drives the flocks from field to fold
When rivers rage and rocks grow cold,
And Philomel becometh dumb;
The rest complains of cares to come.
The flowers do fade, and wanton fields
To wayward winter reckoning yields;
A honey tongue, a heart of gall,
Is fancy's spring, but sorrow's fall.
Thy gowns, thy shoes, thy beds of roses,
Thy cap, thy kirtle, and thy posies
Soon break, soon wither, soon forgotten
In folly ripe, in season rotten.
Thy belt of straw and ivy buds,
Thy coral clasps and amber studs,
All these in me no means can move
To come to thee and be thy love.
But could youth last and love still breed,
Had joys no date nor age no need,
Then these delights my mind might move
To live with thee and be thy love.
- I first read these poems for Mrs. Payne's AP English class. As a high school girl I remember thinking the Shepherd was so romantic and that as funny and as clever as the "Nymph's" response was, she was a little too hard on the poor guy. Now I say, "good for you girl keep your head on straight."
- Question #1 What is the balance between enjoying the world through rose colored glasses and having a strong sense of reality?
- Question #2 What do you think the shepherds response to the hard headed Nymph might be? Is he turned off by her rejection? Impressed by her strong sense of reality? Or is he more enthralled than ever because of her rejection of him?
“The Lanyard” Billy Collins 2005, courtesy of Melissa
The other day I was ricocheting slowly
off the blue walls of this room,
moving as if underwater from typewriter to piano,
from bookshelf to an envelope lying on the floor,
when I found myself in the L section of the dictionary
where my eyes fell upon the word lanyard.
No cookie nibbled by a French novelist
could send one into the past more suddenly—
a past where I sat at a workbench at a camp
by a deep Adirondack lake
learning how to braid long thin plastic strips
into a lanyard, a gift for my mother.
I had never seen anyone use a lanyard
or wear one, if that’s what you did with them,
but that did not keep me from crossing
strand over strand again and again
until I had made a boxy
red and white lanyard for my mother.
She gave me life and milk from her breasts,
and I gave her a lanyard.
She nursed me in many a sick room,
lifted spoons of medicine to my lips,
laid cold face-cloths on my forehead,
and then led me out into the airy light
and taught me to walk and swim,
and I, in turn, presented her with a lanyard.
Here are thousands of meals, she said,
and here is clothing and a good education.
And here is your lanyard, I replied,
which I made with a little help from a counselor.
Here is a breathing body and a beating heart,
strong legs, bones and teeth,
and two clear eyes to read the world, she whispered,
and here, I said, is the lanyard I made at camp.
And here, I wish to say to her now,
is a smaller gift—not the worn truth
that you can never repay your mother,
but the rueful admission that when she took
the two-tone lanyard from my hand,
I was as sure as a boy could be
that this useless, worthless thing I wove
out of boredom would be enough to make us even
- A few years ago my friend invited me to come to her home and read poetry. I laughed and declined her lame offer. Every month, she would invite me and I would decline. At some point I found out that cookies were involved, so I went to her poetry group. The cookies were good, but I still wasn't into the poetry. One month someone brought a poem by Billy Collins and poetry came alive for me. I understood what he was saying and I loved the way he was saying it. I have since grown fond of poetry and this poem by Mr. Collins is my favorite.
- For Mother's Day one year, I made my mom a lanyard and attached a copy of this poem and a note that said, "Hope this makes us even."
“Poetry” Marianne Moore 1961, courtesy of Shari
I, too, dislike it: there are things that are important beyond all this fiddle.
Reading it, however, with a perfect contempt for it, one
discovers in
it after all, a place for the genuine.
Hands that can grasp, eyes
that can dilate, hair that can rise
if it must, these things are important not because a
high-sounding interpretation can be put upon them but because
they are
useful. When they become so derivative as to become
unintelligible,
the same thing may be said for all of us, that we
do not admire what
we cannot understand: the bat
holding on upside down or in quest of something to
eat, elephants pushing, a wild horse taking a roll, a tireless
wolf under
a tree, the immovable critic twitching his skin like a horse
that feels a flea, the base-
ball fan, the statistician--
nor is it valid
to discriminate against "business documents and
school-books"; all these phenomena are important. One must make
a distinction
however: when dragged into prominence by half poets, the
result is not poetry,
nor till the poets among us can be
"literalists of
the imagination"--above
insolence and triviality and can present
for inspection, "imaginary gardens with real toads in them,"
shall we have
it. In the meantime, if you demand on the one hand,
the raw material of poetry in
all its rawness and
that which is on the other hand
genuine, you are interested in poetry.
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· Where do you discover things in your life that are "genuine"?
· Do we ever "admire what we cannot understand?"
“When I Married,” from Letter to My Mother, John Holmes 1952, courtesy of Shari
When I married, I caught up
On the history of the heart.
I stepped into your generation.
That welcoming fort.
That house you kept house in
While I was a child.
Now I am in my open door
Standing, and growing old.
Fond, and kind, and faithful
By a habit of the heart,
You keep with your own quiet
The world from falling apart.
But the world runs down, dust
Falls, the young become the old.
You learned that long ago,
And hold all you have held.
I am my father, and have a son.
Our voices sound the same.
Troubles we may not have alone
Are spelled in our name.
Your face was bone and width your own,
But half of yours is mine
To stare with a a world not wrong,
Not right, but by design
A clearing, a clouding tree of stars
That put down roots and grew.
I live under its shine and shade,
And can what I must do.
“Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening,” Robert Frost 1923, courtesy of Shari
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
Robert Frost, “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” from The Poetry of Robert Frost, edited by Edward Connery Lathem. Copyright 1923, © 1969 by Henry Holt and Company, Inc., renewed 1951, by Robert Frost. Reprinted with the permission of Henry Holt and Company, LLC.
Source: The Random House Book of Poetry for Children (1983)
· What do you "stop" and enjoy?
· What is the mood of this poem for you: Hopeful? Depressing? Reflective? Why?
“Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird” Wallace Stevens 1917, courtesy of Ashley
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Among twenty snowy mountains,
The only moving thing
Was the eye of blackbird.
II
I was of three minds,
Like a tree
In which there are three blackbirds.
III
The blackbird whirled in the autumn winds.
It was a small part of the pantomime.
IV
A man and a woman
Are one.
A man and a woman and a blackbird
Are one.
V
I do not know which to prefer,
The beauty of inflections
Or the beauty of innuendoes,
The blackbird whistling,
Or just after.
VI
Icicles filled the long window
With barbaric glass.
The shadow of the blackbird
Crossed it, to and fro.
The mood
Traced in the shadow
An indecipherable cause.
VII
O thin men of Haddam,
Why do you imagine golden birds?
Do you not see how the blackbird
Walks around the feet
Of the women about you?
VIII
I know noble accents
And lucid, inescapable rhythms;
But I know, too,
That the blackbird is involved
In what I know.
IX
When the blackbird flew out of sight,
It marked the edge
Of one of many circles.
X
At the sight of blackbirds
Flying in a green light,
Even the bawds of euphony
Would cry out sharply.
XI
He rode over Connecticut
In a glass coach.
Once, a fear pierced him,
In that he mistook
The shadow of his equipage
For blackbirds.
XII
The river is moving.
The blackbird must be flying.
XIII
It was evening all afternoon.
It was snowing
And it was going to snow.
The blackbird sat
In the cedar-limbs.
· It's easy to dismiss this poem as silly or of little value because it at first doesn't seem to be about anything. But it's one of the most famous poems of the Modernist movement in literature--why? Stevens once wrote, "This group of poems is not meant to be a collection of epigrams or ideas, but of sensations." What sensation stands out the most to you? What is your reaction to this poem?
· This poem is also about perspective and reality. Consider the first stanza: are you looking at the blackbird or is the blackbird looking at you?
“Dreams,” Langston Hughes 1950ish, courtesy of Kate
Hold fast to dreams
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird
That cannot fly.
Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow.
· In the first four lines, Hughes illustrates how necessary dreams are. Dreams offer hope, and without those two factors, progress is hard to come by. In my class (in a historical context), we've talked a lot about how expectations seldom match up with reality, and the different paths that frustration can lead to. When your dreams "go,” where do you go? What moves you forward?
“Warm Summer Sun” Mark Twain 1896, courtesy of Kate
Warm summer sun,
Shine kindly here,
Warm southern wind,
Blow softly here.
Green sod above,
Lie light, lie light.
Good night, dear heart,
Good night, good night.
· Although the groundhog saw his shadow on February 2, I didn't see mine. Provo was sunny and warm(ish) that Tuesday and it got me excited for spring. While I can't wait to spend time outside and wear my new sundress, warmer weather is also a precursor to finals. For me, the coming sunshine turns the dream/nightmare of graduation into a reality.
· What do the warmer months have in store for you this year? Are you ready?

Mary -
ReplyDeleteIt was a delight to read, “Which Loved Her Best?” - every young mother’s favorite poem. It made me think of Grandpa Dick, your Dad, and President Monson. I think I have heard all of them quote it from memory. I think it would be nice to have your children memorize it, if they want to. My guess is it would be easier to start with something shorter. They may be the “Nymph” to your “Shepherd”. In other words, you love the idea of little Nell - your children (all children), are “reality”.
Perhaps the balance between rose colored glasses and reality is a sense of poetry combined with a sense of humor.
Being “a woman of a certain age”, I can not imagine the shepherd being more enthralled than ever by the rejection.
Melissa
I really enjoyed “The Lanyard”. Being the mother of a twelve year old boy who is about to turn thirteen, I would love to receive a lanyard, made by his hands.
However...
After buying some little valentines, I encouraged him all week to fill them out with nice thoughts for his nephews and nieces. I also mentioned he should do one for me and his dad. I may have mentioned this more than once. On Sunday, twenty minutes before the family was to arrive for dinner, I reminded him again. He wrote carefully, really, and read to me what he had written on each one, for my approval. Very dear. Then he came in my bedroom and asked if he could give me mine, right now. He held out the card and immediately read it to me. “I love you very much, you bless my life so much. Rob.” My lanyard. We are even, forever.
Ashley-
I think I liked “Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird” and I know I needed your analysis. The sensation I feel when I read it is movement. - and dark, and light, with a little shadow. I would love to talk with you about this poem.
Kate
I like “Dreams”. When my dreams go, I think I look for another. After Dad and I went to a wonderful play at the U on Saturday, I reminded him that a very long time ago I wanted very badly to be an actress. Actually, I wanted to be a famous one. I always imagined myself at the Academy Awards. I don’t anymore. I became a quilter and a gardener. They suit me just fine.
I love “Warm Summer Sun”. The warm sun and warm winds bring gardening, and I can hardly wait. I love it. I am already making plans for new projects.
Mary--I think I have more of a Nell than a Fan right now, and when she goes out to play, I am relieved! But I still love her the best. As for more talk than action? Eating vegetables. And I always thought the Nymph seemed ornery, but now that I'm older, I realize there's more to love than beds of roses and May mornings--the shepherd now just seems silly. And his response to the Nymph? He probably just took his harp and skipped off to woo another maiden because I don't think he really loved the Nymph--she would have just added to the idyllic scenery. I guess I've traded in my rosy spectacles, but there's still a lot of joy in reality--maybe more.
ReplyDeleteMelissa--I loved this poem!I liked the voice and tone--it didn't feel at all pretentious. Wait . . . is a book of Billy Collins' poetry one of the prizes? Yep--I'll be leaving comments left and right! There is something really touching about a son giving his mother something he made at camp--if my son ever makes me something at camp, we would totally be even forever too. But when my daughter gives me something (and it is always sweet), it's as if she is telling me that I'll never be even with her! Oh daughters . . .
Shari--I read "Poetry" over and over again. I have been known to be a poetry hater among my friends :), but maybe I'm not. (Anne, why am I not surprised that because of you, I've changed my mind about something? That, and Cody gave me a book of John Keats' poetry as a Valentine. Oh my word, am I starting to like poetry again?!) And yes, we can admire and even love what we don't understand--especially people.
I also liked the Robert Frost poem. It made me think of a winter's night around Christmas when I went outside to take out the garbage. It had just snowed all day and everything was so pretty and quiet. I stopped to look at the sky and trees, but then I remembered that dinner was cooking and so hurried in. I think the poem is a little sad because we don't always have the time to enjoy what is beautiful.
Kate--I think it's okay to let some dreams go--sometimes we outgrow them. But we should always have something to dream about or we would be boring and unhappy--which is what I think the poem is saying. As for the warm summer months? Since we spent a couple summers with my husband in grad school, then a summer looking for a house, then a summer with me being pregnant, the Curtis family is due for some fun hiking, camping, and just being outside more this year.
Phew, that was one long comment. Sorry everyone.
Mary-
ReplyDeleteI love the Nymph's response. I agree with previous posts. The guy would take his fancy clothes and accessories elsewhere. I think he's more into "wooing" than he is into true love. Assuming the Nymph picked up on that, I'm proud of her for holding out for a hero.
Melissa-
I enjoyed this poem, because it reminded me of all the crafty things I've made for my mom over the years. Things like key chains at school, hot pads from my 7th grade sewing class, bird feeders for the porch. Most of the time I was so proud of what I'd made, and I wanted Mom to keep them and treasure them always as a symbol of my awesome skills. Looking back, she always hung them up or displayed them somewhere--not because they were creative masterpieces or signs of devotion, but because, yet again, she was supporting me and validating my work to make me feel special. Love ya Mom!
Shari-
I think I discover things that are genuine by sharing experiences with people close to me. Sharing late-night pep-talks with roommates always helps me see things in my own life clearer. When I really open up to a close friend or sister and share my thought process, I feel like I make genuine progress by really connecting and sharing ideas.
Ashley-
I think the blackbird is totally looking at me...Does that mean something? It's interesting how that perspective contrasts with the title.
For a FIFTH comment (right, Anne?) I think I'll respond to what Mom said about mine: I, too, have dreams of an Academy Award. Since my six-month plan is swiftly becoming a four-month plan, I've been coming up with all sorts of new dreams--hence why I'm applying for jobs all over the country :)